The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the number of people in 2011 who studied art
in
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at
the
UK university.
Correct article usage
a
Overall
, there are men
and women students. Ladies have more numbers than gentlements
in 5 subjects.
There are 5 majors that have a big quantity Correct your spelling
gentlemen
gentlemen's
are
girls, Linguistic, Philosophy, English language and literature, History and Archaeology and Communication and media study. The biggest subject is language.
Art and design are more fascinating for males, and the number is bigger than Unnecessary verb
apply
females
. They up to 190 people for Change preposition
for females
Add an article
the guy
a guy
guy
and 170 for Fix the agreement mistake
guys
female
. In that Fix the agreement mistake
females
case
they have 20 ratios to each other.
The largest proportion of women is in the English language. They reach 250 females and 230 males. Philosophy and History Archaeology are the lowest numbered in Add a comma
,case
men
. but on the other side
women are still outnumbered by Add a comma
,side
men
. This
means female is more active to choose their major because the proportion is bigger than men
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