The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line chart depicts the proportion of
books
that were borrowed from four libraries which are surveyed monthly, while
the pie graph indicates the percentage
of the genre from each book.
In general, all of the number
of Change to a plural noun
numbers
books
lent revealed upward
tendency, Correct article usage
an upward
whereas
only Ryeslip had a downward trend. In addition
, there was a
largest Change the article
the
percentage
of Fiction in the graph than in other types.
In detail, west eaton and church mount were
rose gradually from June to September which began Unnecessary verb
apply
on
50 Change preposition
with
books
, then
continued to grow until 150. Sutton Wood also
followed a similar pattern, nevertheless
with fluctuated wildly from 250 to approximately 270 in July, then
surprisingly experienced a decline in the next month to 100 and became 300 in the last
period. In contrast
, ryeslip had a gradual decreased
from 300 to around 170 Replace the word
decrease
books
.
On the other hand
, based on the genre, The reader who love
fiction was 42%, and Change the verb form
loves
this
was the biggest amount from four
libraries compared to others. The second enormous Correct article usage
the four
percentage
was biography which was 19%. According to
this
, the rest of them had small
Correct article usage
a small
percentage
, which were
38% if combined.Change the verb form
was
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