You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You should write at least 150 words

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with

regarding

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to

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a matter which I had during my stay in your hotel. As a frequent guest of your

hotelery

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hotel

hostelry

, I am

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happy with your services but,

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unfortunately

I have a grave problem to report.

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week I travelled to London and stayed in your hotel at Principal Avenue. Because

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weather, which was less than zero celsius, I was hoping that would possible to find a

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comfortable

room,

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in the room that was given to me, the heating not only was not running properly

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but

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the control temperature was missed. Since I had discovered

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issue, was necessary to wait long 2 hours until your employees fix that, bringing a new control and changing a part inside the heating. Considering that probably I will return to your hotel, I expect not only a free stay to cover

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inappropriate matter, but

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a second check after my

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travel. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest regarding

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proposal. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale.