You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You should write at least 150 words

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with
regarding
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to
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a matter which I had during my stay in your hotel. As a frequent guest of your
hotelery
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hotel
hostelry
, I am
a
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happy with your services but,
unfortunatelly
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unfortunately
I have a grave problem to report.
Last
week I travelled to London and stayed in your hotel at Principal Avenue. Because
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weather, which was less than zero celsius, I was hoping that would possible to find a
confortable
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comfortable
room,
however
in the room that was given to me, the heating not only was not running properly
,
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but
also
the control temperature was missed. Since I had discovered
this
issue, was necessary to wait long 2 hours until your employees fix that, bringing a new control and changing a part inside the heating. Considering that probably I will return to your hotel, I expect not only a free stay to cover
this
inappropriate matter, but
also
a second check after my
last
travel. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest regarding
this
proposal. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
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