big salary is much more important than job satisfaction agree or disagree writting task in ielts

Nowdays

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Nowadays

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People are more concerned about wages and business achievement. Both are Equally Important to a Human

Being

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growth. From my point of ,View

i

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disagree with

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statement because if we don'

t

have work happiness it will affect growth in different ways without career joy we are working in a company will lead to career loss, no concentration won'

t

be there

while

working,

moreover

mental

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pressure of a worker will lead to serious health issues

for example

diseases like Hypertension, Blood pressure is the cause of

this

. A big salary gives you more money but we can'

t

enjoy it because of our stressful

soul

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. without any ,happiness if we got much money, there is no meaning in that. Sometimes restless person's mind is a devil's workshop.

now days

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most people are under treatment for depression, Anxiety, and even Suicide now common everywhere. most of the reasons are related to stress, People Don'

t

know to Handle a Stressful heart. Everyone runs behind the money. if we are getting a high salary that much work

also

will be there. so if we know to manage these two together

that is

a great achievement in life In ,Conclusion I disagree with

this

statement,

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moreover

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both are needed for

person's

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a person's

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happy life. if the salary is less it will affect our activity, if activity achievement is not there, that will fall under unhappy life. So both play equally important to

person's

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a person's

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growth