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You receive complaint letter about poor service from a member of your staff at your restaurant

#complaint #service #member #staff #restaurant
Dear Mr James Dear Mr
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Jack I have
Received
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 your letter of
complate
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complaint
 regarding poor service from a member of staff at my
restaurant
, The Seaside Inn. I wanted to clarify that
this
 is exactly what happened
i
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 am the owner of
this
restaurant
, and my
restaurant
 is pretty good and many people like it. Can you explain what exactly happened
.
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 My employees have been tested on probation. My
restaurant
 has long been known to many people. If my employees have not been well served to you,
then
 I will take notice specifying
this
 Now I checked the security cameras. I apologize
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 my employees. Sorry for
this
 inconvenience, apparently
this
 employee was new, maybe he didn't know well.
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the
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fact that we were guilty before you, you can not pay for your dinner,
this
 will be our apology from our
restaurant
 to you. Cheers and have a good dinner. BON APPETIT
Restaurant
 owner Mr Jesica
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