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You have lost your student ID Card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student service. Write: Advise them of yout situation; Explain how this is affecting you; Request a new card

#student #id #card #director #service #yout #situation #request
Mr Director Director of
student services
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Student Services
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X Collage Melbourne, Australia Dear Director of
students
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Students
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, I am writing to express
you
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apply
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my concern about losing my identification
card
. The
last
 weekend, I went to the library
for renting
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to rent
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 a book and
then
 I went to dinner outside and I lost my wallet, the problem was I didn’t leave my wallet in the restaurant, maybe it fell down on the street. First of all, I request you to please
avail
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provide
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 me
a
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with a
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new
student
 ID
card
 because I can’t travel by
the
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apply
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local transport and without
student
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a student
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 ID
Card
 I
couldn’t
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can’t
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 board the
collage
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college
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 bus.
In addition
, I
also
 have no right to return the books from the library. I would be very thankful if you
can
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could
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 consider my situation and issue me a new
card
student
 ID
card
. I assure you that I will preserve
this
card
 till the end of my term. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Mireia
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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