Task 1: The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way in which
rainwater
is used and transformed into drinking water
in an Australian town.
Overall
, there are five main steps in this
process which starts
with collecting Change the verb form
start
water
by drains and ends when drinking water
is used by Australian
in their house.
What happens in Correct your spelling
Australians
the first
step
is that rainwater
runs into the drains or gutters in each Australian’s house. Following that, rainwater
undergoes a step
of purification, where it flows into a huge storage. As a result
, water
becomes sanitary. At the storage, rainwater
is ready to be purified again.
The next step
occurs when water
runs into a water
treatment, which aims to purify again by using chemicals such
as Chlorine. As a consequence
, pure water
is ensured to be hygienic. What people do in the next
step
is let water
run into pipes. Add an article
the water
Finally
, drinking water
is maintained by the pipes to Australia's houses for drinking or use in households.Submitted by hoailinhvu0504 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainwater, water, step with synonyms.
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