The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
The graph illustrates the
production
of three raw materials which
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
paper
,wood
pulp
and sawn-
Correct your spelling
sawn wood
wood
in the United kingdom
for two decades from 1980 to 2000.
for Change the capitalization
Kingdom
paper
and packaging,from 1980 paper
till 2000 and packaging was the highest and more than double produced as compared to the other two products.from the
1980 to 1990 its Change the article
apply
production
has steadily grown meanwhile,
wood
pulp
and sawn-wood
manufacturing has significantly dropped from 1980 to 1990.in the last
decade of Correct article usage
the 19th
19th century
Add a hyphen
19th-century
paper
and packaging manufacturing increased sharply to around 100 million
tons
increased till the end of 2000.
with reference to wood
pulp
,In 1980 its manufacturing has been significantly declining and decreased for
200 Change preposition
from
million
tons
to 150 million
tons
till the last
of1990,in the next 10 years from 1990 to 200 its production
has been further
decreasing even though other
two products have increased their Correct article usage
the other
production
in this
period.
with reference to swan-
Correct your spelling
swan wood
wood
, in the 2nd last
decade of 19th-century swan-wood
has slightly decreased in production
to 150 million
tons
almost equal to the
Correct article usage
apply
wood
pulp
production
even though its production
has not fallen like wood
pulp
since now both are equal.In the next ten years sawn wood
has
recovered and grown its Unnecessary verb
apply
production
steadily and reached the 1980 production
amount by 2000.Submitted by adarshghai6 on
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