The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
The line graph illustrates three productions of man-made products in wood that were manufactured specifically in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
overall
, paper
and packaging products gained the most income whereas
the sawn-wood earned the least.
In 1980, the total weight production of paper
and packaging placed at approximately 240 million
tonnes
, then
this
number slightly increased to 250 million
before having a significant rise to 350 million
tonnes
in 2000.
Conversely
, Wood Pulp and Sawn-Wood saw different fashions as paper
and packaging. In 1980, the amount of production of two kinds of paper
stayed at about 170 and exactly 200 million
tonnes
, respectively. After that, there were plummets in both productions in 1990 and shared the same low points at 150 million
tonnes
. Finally
, Wood Pulp saw a minor increase to around 160 million
in 2000 while
the Sawn-Wood observed a continuous downtrend in under 150 million
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