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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter, tell them why you need to move the interview time ask to change the interview date explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

#minutes #interview #weeks #date #employer #move #time #change #job #addresses
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Patryk Kupski and I am writing to inform you that
unfortunetly
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unfortunately
 I cannot meet
an
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 interview
in
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next
monday
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. In
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addition
addtion
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 I would like to thank you for
invite
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 me. My schedule changed, from
long
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 time I am waiting
on
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visit
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a visit
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 to
specialist
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a specialist
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 doctor
in
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 Warsaw university medical. Something happened and they changed my visit
on
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monday
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Monday
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,
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apply
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 when we have an
inteview
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interview
. I am still very
intresting
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interesting
 in that job, I think that job is for me. After
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the visit
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visit
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 I have
whole
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 week free. Can we meet
in
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 another date ? please. I am flexible and open, If you
want
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 make an interview online it is not a problem for me. Here is my phone number for contact: 513-096-416. If you require any
further
 information, feel free to contact me. I look forward to your reply. Thank you in
anvance
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! Yours Faithfully, Patryk Kupski
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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