Average percentages of sodium,saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of three ingredients in four classic
meals
in the United States.
Overall
, Dinner has the highest rate of
sodium
and saturated fat and second in added
sugar
between other
meals
.
While
snacks have the most added
sugar
rate.
However
, Breakfast is the healthiest of them as it
contain
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less
sugar
,
sodium
and saturated fat. Two of the
meals
have the most ingredients these are dinner and snacks. Dinner leads the
sodium
,
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and saturated fat and
second
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in added
sugar
by 43%, 37% and 23% , respectively. In the
,
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snacks they have the most added
sugar
in themself by almost half. The remaining
meals
are breakfast and lunch. Lunch is in second position in
sodium
and saturated fat by a quarter per cent and third place in Added
sugar
which is 19 per cent. For the breakfast, it contains the least amount of
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
in itself.
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