Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It is argued that there are certain occupations that should be paid higher than others, considering particular factors

such

as the

job

hardships, and the services they give.

However

, certain jobs, especially those which are in the entertainment sector which is considered a lower-risk occupation, are paid

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a better salary range. Regarding

this

, I strongly disagree with

this

fact, because I believe that the

job

with the higher level of risk and a longer work

timetime

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deserves to be paid more. The profession that has a high level of risk will suffer more obstacles and sometimes the workers in

this

sector have to do something that can endanger themselves.

Moreover

, only particular people will meet the qualifications for doing

this

kind of appointment

such

as a constructor who builds a house, they have to follow safety instructions to ensure themselves and avoid unwanted accidents in

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workplace. Regarding these facts, I can assume that they deserve to receive a high amount of monthly income because they are kind of sacrificing their

life

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for

this

employment. Spending most of the

time

in the office environment will be so stressful. In order to finish the entire task in the company, the majority of people have to spare their

time

in the workplace. By doing

this

, it means that they do not have sufficient

time

to enjoy their lives with someone they love,

such

as their families and friends. Even though it feels suffocating for them, they cannot do anything

due to

the need for income for feeding their families.

Therefore

, I suppose that

this

type of

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will be appropriate to earn a high salary

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because they are willing to utilize a large amount of

time

for doing their

job

.

To sum up

, I agree that a particular type of

job

is worth earning more salary than others, and we can use the scale of how dangerous their

job

is and how many hours they spend doing the employment as the consideration for determining how much their revenue is.