The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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and later used in the concrete for construction work.

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, what stands out from the diagrams is that

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production is a multi-stage task requiring only two raw materials,

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creating concrete needs a number of ingredients, and is completed in just a single step. Focusing first on how

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is made,

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, limestone and clay are passed through a crusher to make a powder which is

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mixed properly.

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mixture is now rotated and heated in a cylindrical pipe with an external heating source.

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,

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is obtained after finely grinding

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mix and later packed in

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bags. Turning to concrete production, in a giant concrete mixer all the components are added in fixed proportions. Half of

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is gravel, which

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small stones,

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the earlier produced

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and sand account for 25% and 15%, respectively, and the remaining percentage

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up

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water.

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rotated continuously to get concrete which can be used for building purposes.