The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given illustration demonstrates the process by which
cement
is made,
and later used in the concrete for construction work.
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Overall
, what stands out from the diagrams is that cement
production is a multi-stage task requiring only two raw materials, while
creating concrete needs a number of ingredients, and is completed in just a single step.
Focusing first on how cement
is made, initially
, limestone and clay are passed through a crusher to make a powder which is the
mixed properly. Correct article usage
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This
mixture is now rotated and heated in a cylindrical pipe with an external heating source. Finally
, cement
is obtained after finely grinding this
mix and later packed in cement
bags.
Turning to concrete production, in a giant concrete mixer all the components are added in fixed proportions. Half of this
is gravel, which are
small stones, Change the verb form
is
whereas
the earlier produced cement
and sand account for 25% and 15%, respectively, and the remaining percentage made
up Add a missing verb
is made
by
water. Change preposition
of
This
is then
rotated continuously to get concrete which can be used for building purposes.Submitted by sharmasarthak96 on
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