The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrated how rainwater can be converted to potable drinking

water

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. A particular town in Australia utilizes

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kind of method. Over, rainwater is the main component

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this

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process to

occure

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occur

.

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method goes through several filtrations and

water

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chemical

treatment

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treatments

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before it can be

dispatch

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dispatched

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as

an

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apply

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edible drinking

water

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for consumption.

It

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In

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detail, houses with drain pipes

collecte

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collect

collected

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when the rain pours. The rainwater will

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go down through another pipe

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connected

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to

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a

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filtration machine. After the filtration, the

rainwatr

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rainwater

is stored over a certain period of time.

Afterwhich

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After which

, it will be subjected

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to

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water

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treatment by adding chemicals that are intended to eliminate extra microorganisms that might still be lingering in the filtered

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.

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the latter part, the treated

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will

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travel all the way up via a narrow pipeline. In

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stage

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it is ready for consumption

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by

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the mass.