The charts below show the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The chart depicts the values of several types of products through one country's exportation and the table contain the different values in rate in the year 2015 and 2016.

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, petroleum goods were at the peak as compared to the rest of the brand and define the product growth in billions . All categories of output had different percentages of values. Petroleum was the highest of all categories. It was around 60 billion in the year 2015,

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, In 2016 it was slightly over. Engineering goods and gems and jewellery had fluctuations in both years.

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, agriculture remained the same in 2015 and 2016.

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, textile was at the lowest. In the second table, textile products value tremendously changed, it was at skyrocketed by 15.24%. It had only o.81%. Engineering goods were the second highest percentage in the table with 8.5%.

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, agriculture faced lowered trend.

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, petroleum products significantly decreased.

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The charts below show the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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