The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts compare the proportion of
water
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consumption for industrial , agricultural and domestic
usage
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in the six different countries , which were measured in percentage. In general , out of six nations ; four of them used most of their
water
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for agricultural purposes.
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, for the other two , it was for industrial
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. To be specific, in
compared
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to
those four-nation
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; who used
water
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for agriculture ; Central Asia accounted for
most
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and it constituted 88% of that sector.
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other three countries utilised 84%, 81% and 71% of
water
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for agricultural purposes respectively. Meanwhile ,
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two areas made up the least
water
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usage
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in those four nations and it constituted 5% to 12% for industrial purposes.
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, for domestic ,
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it was 19% and 99% for South America and Africa .
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Central Asia and South East Asia made up the same ratio of 7%. Meanwhile , Europe and North America were the countries that used most of their
water
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for
industrial
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the industrial
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sector and it was 48% and 53% respectively .
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, for
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two sectors , it was 39% and 32% for agriculture .
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for domestic , it was almost a minority .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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