The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts compare the proportion of other three countries utilised 84%, 81% and 71% of
water
consumption for industrial , agricultural and domestic usage
in the six different countries , which were measured in percentage.
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for agricultural purposes. Whereas
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for agriculture ; Central Asia accounted for most
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in those four nations and it constituted 5% to 12% for industrial purposes. Whereas
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it was 19% and 99% for South America and Africa . While
Central Asia and South East Asia made up the same ratio of 7%.
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