Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree?

The development of trust is the first step in the therapeutic nurse-client relationship with a client.
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therapeutic communication and the nurse-client relationship are both based on open and sincere communication. In
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has to maintain a nonjudgmental, unbiased attitude regarding the patient's views, feelings, and ideas
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express his values and beliefs.
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