The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram shows the stages for the
production
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of
cement
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and concrete. In order to produce concrete it is necessary to use
cement
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as an
imput
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input
. For the
production
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of
cement
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,
first
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it is necessary to have limestone and clay, after that both materials are transformed to powder
due to
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the crusher. The powder
then
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enter
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to
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the mixer to combine both
imputs
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inputs
. Once it is mixed, heat is applied in a rotating heater and
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finally
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it is
grinded
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ground
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to eliminate impurities. After the
production
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process is done,
cement
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can be applied in bags. For
the
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apply
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concrete
production
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, it is needed to combine 50% of gravel,
that
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which
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are
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small stones, 25% of sand, 15%
cement
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and 10% water in a concrete mixer. Once it is correctly mixed, we have concrete.
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