The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram shows the stages for the
production
of cement
and concrete. In order to produce concrete it is necessary to use cement
as an imput
.
For the Correct your spelling
input
production
of cement
, first
it is necessary to have limestone and clay, after that both materials are transformed to powder Add a comma
,first
due to
the crusher. The powder then
enter
Change the verb form
enters
to
the mixer to combine both Change preposition
apply
imputs
. Once it is mixed, heat is applied in a rotating heater and Correct your spelling
inputs
finally
it is Add a comma
,finally
grinded
to eliminate impurities. After the Correct your spelling
ground
production
process is done, cement
can be applied in bags.
For the
concrete Correct article usage
apply
production
, it is needed to combine 50% of gravel, that
Correct pronoun usage
which
are
small stones, 25% of sand, 15% Correct subject-verb agreement
is
cement
and 10% water in a concrete mixer. Once it is correctly mixed, we have concrete.Submitted by mamirzaium on
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