Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

Some

company

owners want to contact their employees at each

times

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, even on off

days

. It does not bring any types of benefits rather it creates

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private disturbance. On holidays

work

brings more demerits than merits.

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with, workers are continuing their

working

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on

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five or six

days

and get just one day off. On that day if the

company

's

entrepreneurship

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try

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to connect with them

then

they are feeling

distrub

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disturb

disturbed

. As it affects their personal lives , they can not enjoy their holiday properly.

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company's

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owner

are

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calling their employees on public off

days

and it will interrupt their private lives.

Secondly

, some people may take a few

days

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holidays

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for

family

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a family

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occasion

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or other stuff but the entrepreneur

distrubs

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disturbs

them by phone calls or by emails ,

then

they may lose their

work

's interest

on

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that

company

. Whatever, the owner can contact

with

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them for emergencies but not

in

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every

times

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.

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, if

employer

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the employer

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takes holidays for him/her sister's or brother's wedding and

then

they get any calls or messages from the office , it created masses in his personal life.

Besides

, it creates

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problem

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on

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workers' physical and mental health. Because for refreshment they take a long time break from their

work

segment, and if they never relax

their

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break period

then

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they

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will face various types of health issues

such

as

,

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heart attack , blood pressure, depression and so on.

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new York times I read

the

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worker gets

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attack

for

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lots of phone calls and

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pressure. Though

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with

worker

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may be good for

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development and for

well

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relationships between owners and workers but it has some limitations. In conclusion, some companies should give the employees their own private life and have to give them

relax

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for their physical and mental well-being. So I disagree with the essay statement . Because it can not outweigh the disadvantages.