Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

Dear Sir or Madam, I
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Rubenel Laurino,
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saw your job posting yesterday on tv ads that
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hiring for a
cook
. I want to apply because
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position you are hiring
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suits my work. By the
way
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im
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I'm
a
cook
helper at a restaurant in
other city
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, my main job is to assist the chef
cook
to do some chopping of meat and some vegetables, I want to apply as a
cook
,
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because
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want to upgrade my knowledge of cooking on my own. I
laready
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already
have
the
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experience
of
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cooking Asian and American foods, but my
specialty
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speciality
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is Asia foods. but
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know
also
some
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Italian
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dishes. My contract
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my previous company will end
this
coming end of
the
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month, and
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I'm
very glad to apply
in
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your restaurant and work for the company. I know
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can help you and your team with my experience and knowledge in cooking. I can come for
interview
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anytime
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This
is my number 0538817200
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Hearing from you soon. Thank you very much. Respectfully, Rubenel
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