The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about how regional household recycles and its rate in the
UK
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, France and
Germany
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between 2005 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the line graph that in the
UK
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and
Germany
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the percentage of recycling was bigger than in France,
although
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, at the beginning of the period, it has more per
cent
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. In 2005, in France, the majority of people recycled was 50 per
cent
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,
while
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in the
UK
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and
Germany
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, the percentage was much lower, under 40 and precisely 20 per
cent
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,
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however
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the rates in the
UK
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increased sharply with some fluctuations and
finally
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reached a peak in 2015, almost more than 60 per
cent
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.
Germany
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also
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showed a big rise in the percentage of household recycling so that it continued to grow up and reached a peak at under 60
at the end
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of the period. The French people were less recycled so the proportion of rates decreased gradually and it was under 40 in 2015 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, germany, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional household recycling rates
  • overall trend
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • fluctuations
  • marginal decline
  • notable drop
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • year-on-year growth
  • data patterns
  • rate of change
  • noteworthy milestones
  • disparities
  • environmental policies
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