The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

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The given linear graph

illustrate

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the rate of recycling by regional families who live in three countries

during

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over

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10 years.

overall

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, it can be seen that

proportion

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the proportion

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of recycling in

United

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the United

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Kingdom and Germany had been increased

while

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it was reduced in France

than

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the beginning. In 2005, half of

population

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the population

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in France recycled what they used and it

was

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apply

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declined

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to 30% by 2013

then

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rose again

until

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40%

during

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over

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2 years.

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hand

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there were 35% of people

who

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apply

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participate in recycling and slightly increased up to 40%

then

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search up to 55% and remain climbing

until

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60% in

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the UK

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. Germany showed

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a more

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or less similar trend with less fluctuation. Germany was the least recycling country in 2005 and it was 20% of

population

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the population

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but it

was

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gradually

rosen

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risen

rose

up to 55%

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the end of 10 years. As the proportion dropped drastically, even though there was a little rise after 2013, France become

least

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the least

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recyclers

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recycler

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among

three

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the three

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countries.

madhuherath.mannyMon Mar 06 2023

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

regional household recycling rates
overall trend
significant increase
steady rise
fluctuations
marginal decline
notable drop
peak
trough
comparative analysis
year-on-year growth
data patterns
rate of change
noteworthy milestones
disparities
environmental policies

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