The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
the graph below demonstrates the regional
household
recycling rates
of three different countries: the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015.
The data shows that regional household
recycling rates
in the United Kingdom and Germany did rise whereas
in France it
decreased.
In 2005, France had the highest Correct pronoun usage
they
household
recycling rates
, with 50% of households recycling., with 50% of households recycling.
However
it gradually collapsed until 2013, since
2013 it started Change preposition
apply
increased
and in 2015 it had 40% of households Wrong verb form
increasing
recycling
. as we can see the lowest Wrong verb form
recycled
household
recycling rates
in 2005 ,has Germany with 20% Fix the agreement mistake
rate
although
it did gradually rise and in 2015 it almost reached UkSubmitted by lilit_margaryan2006 on
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