IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3

Average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities

#hours #minutes #uk #males #females #activities
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The table compares the average amount of
time
Use synonyms
 per day that
men
Use synonyms
 and
women
Use synonyms
 in the UK spend doing different activities.
it is clear that
Linking Words
 people in the UK spend more
time
Use synonyms
 sleeping than doing any other
dally
Correct your spelling
daily
show examples
 activity.
Also
Linking Words
, there are significant differences between the
time
Use synonyms
 spent by
men
Use synonyms
 and
women
Use synonyms
 on employment/study and housework. On average,
men
Use synonyms
 and
women
Use synonyms
 in the UK sleep for about 8 hours per day. Leisure takes up the second largest proportion of their
time
Use synonyms
.
Men
Use synonyms
 spend 5 hours and 25
minutes
Use synonyms
 doing various leisure activities,
such
Linking Words
 as watching TV or doing
sport
Fix the agreement mistake
sports
show examples
,
while
Linking Words
women
Use synonyms
 have 4 hours and 53
minutes
Use synonyms
 of leisure
time
Use synonyms
. It is noticeable that
men
Use synonyms
 work or study for an average of 79
minutes
Use synonyms
 more than
women
Use synonyms
 every day.
By contrast
Linking Words
,
women
Use synonyms
 spend 79
minutes
Use synonyms
 more than
men
Use synonyms
 doing housework, and they spend over twice as much
time
Use synonyms
 looking after children.
Submitted by prostoy.pacan4ek on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: