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Average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities

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The table compares the average amount of
time
 per day that
men
 and
women
 in the UK spend doing different activities.
it is clear that
 people in the UK spend more
time
 sleeping than doing any other
dally
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daily
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 activity.
Also
, there are significant differences between the
time
 spent by
men
 and
women
 on employment/study and housework. On average,
men
 and
women
 in the UK sleep for about 8 hours per day. Leisure takes up the second largest proportion of their
time
.
Men
 spend 5 hours and 25
minutes
 doing various leisure activities,
such
 as watching TV or doing
sport
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,
while
women
 have 4 hours and 53
minutes
 of leisure
time
. It is noticeable that
men
 work or study for an average of 79
minutes
 more than
women
 every day.
By contrast
,
women
 spend 79
minutes
 more than
men
 doing housework, and they spend over twice as much
time
 looking after children.
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