You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. Describe a problem with the equipment. Explain what happens when you phoned the shop. Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
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letter to complain about the electronic equipment which I bought from garg electronic store on 6 March 2023. I am Eva Smith and a regular customer of your shop. Recently I purchased a refrigerator from a shop and the model is a thermakino. Unfortunately, it is not working accurately. So, I felt unpleasant.
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, my equipment cooling box does not cool appropriately, on the next day I called the shop worker,
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, they did not pick up my call.
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, I got disappointed with your services because I spent nearly around 25000 rupees on them. All in all, I request you replace my order with a new one
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replace the defective part.
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, I want my money back within 15 days as mentioned in the policy. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithful, Eva Smith.
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