Popular hobbies and interest change over time and are a reflection of fashion and trends, not indicators of what people actually want to do in their free time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Our world is diverse and large. It contains a lot of interesting and fascinating
things
. Everyone makes a choice, to try these
things
in their life and broaden their horizons or to live in a shell. I follow
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the principle that it's better to regret what you did
instead
of regretting what you didn't. There are many different
things
that I haven't done and would like to try. Here are some of those
things
. 1. I would like to learn to swim. As a child, I spent a lot of time with my friends on the riverbank and swam well. Now I want to return the lost skill. Swimming is good for your health.
This
is a simple and cheap way to keep yourself in a good fit. I set
this
as a goal for the near future. 2. One of my desires is to learn foreign languages. I understand that it is always difficult to learn
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language from scratch. Now I'm learning English. I would like to learn
Spanish
. I like
Spanish
because I find it melodious and expressive.
In addition
,
Spanish
is the second most popular language in the world after English.
Therefore
, learning
Spanish
can help me in my professional development and open up new countries and fields of business. 3. I would like to go to New Zealand.
This
is an interesting, unusual and amazing country. I am a big fan of J.R. Tolkien and I dream of visiting the filming location in the village of Hobbiton, which was specially created for the filming of the trilogy "The Lord of the Rings" and "The Hobbit". 4. I want to learn to fly. Yes, you heard right. I would like to learn how to fly a helicopter or a small plane. You may ask, why do I want
this
? Because I want to experience the unique feeling of absolute freedom that flight gives you. 5. As a child, I envied my friends who studied at a music school and played the piano. For me, it was something unattainable, magic. Unfortunately, I didn't have the same opportunity.
This
dream still lives inside me. And someday I will definitely implement it. These are just a small part of the
things
I would like to try in my life. Of course, it is possible to do
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you set a goal and make
a small sustainable changes
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in your life every day to achieve
this
goal.
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