Popular hobbies and interest change over time and are reflection of fashion and Trends ,not indicators of what people actually want to do in their free time do you agree or disagree with this statement

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hobbies since
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childhood?Some
individual
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individuals
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change their leisure
time
activities
and interest
time
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to
time
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of
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world's
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trends. it is believed by
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the majority
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that
people
engage with those
activities
for
time
passing and showing to others that they follow the latest updates of the world and it is not the burning Desire of the particular person. Even though there is some truth behind
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statement most
people
like to have permanent hobbies or interests in their lives. On the one hand, some
people
keep changing their
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about what they really want to do in their free
times
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time
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as they want to follow the rest of
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and have some taste of everything. Other than that, many
of
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modern citizens like to emphasize to others that they engaging with
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fashion and really enjoying their lives.
This
trend
specially
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can be seen in
younger
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generation as they like to report every
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of life
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the
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social media to get
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number of reactions, comments and followers. Not only that they like to imitate celebrities and their behaviours
also
.
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, most
of
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people
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the people
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choose permanent hobbies and
interest
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interests
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,
then
engage with those
activities
from the beginning
of
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or
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later after having some experience as
an
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example we can say some human beings still
playing
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particular
spot
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such
as cricket even though they are in
there
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forties.
This
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people
started playing during their childhood and still like to continue it. Some individuals engage with travelling or reading books throughout their
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. In conclusion, though
youngest
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follow
latest
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the latest
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trend during their free
times
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time
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majority will engage
with
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activities
which
is
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truely
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truly
Desired by their heart sooner or later.
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