Popular hobbies and interest change over time and are reflection of fashion and Trends ,not indicators of what people actually want to do in their free time do you agree or disagree with this statement
Do you have
same
hobbies since Correct article usage
the same
the
childhood?Some Correct article usage
apply
individual
change their leisure Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
time
activities
and interest time
to Change preposition
from time
time
with changes of
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in
world's
trends. it is believed by Correct article usage
the world's
majority
that Add an article
the majority
a majority
people
engage with those activities
for time
passing and showing to others that they follow the latest updates of the world and it is not the burning Desire of the particular person. Even though there is some truth behind above
statement most Correct article usage
the above
people
like to have permanent hobbies or interests in their lives.
On the one hand, some people
keep changing their Minds
about what they really want to do in their free Fix capitalization
minds
times
as they want to follow the rest of Fix the agreement mistake
time
world
and have some taste of everything. Other than that, many Correct article usage
the world
of
modern citizens like to emphasize to others that they engaging with Change preposition
apply
latest
fashion and really enjoying their lives. Change the article
the latest
This
trend specially
can be seen in Replace the word
especially
younger
generation as they like to report every Add an article
the younger
aspects
of life Change to a singular noun
aspect
in
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on
the
social media to get Correct article usage
apply
large
number of reactions, comments and followers. Not only that they like to imitate celebrities and their behaviours Change the article
a large
the large
also
.
On the other hand
, most of
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apply
people
choose permanent hobbies and Add an article
the people
interest
, Fix the agreement mistake
interests
then
engage with those activities
from the beginning of
later after having some experience as Correct your spelling
or
an
example we can say some human beings still Correct article usage
apply
playing
particular Wrong verb form
play
spot
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spots
such
as cricket even though they are in there
forties. Replace the word
their
This
Correct determiner usage
These
people
started playing during their childhood and still like to continue it. Some individuals engage with travelling or reading books throughout their live
.
In conclusion, though Replace the word
lives
youngest
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the youngest
latest
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the latest
times
majority will engage Fix the agreement mistake
time
with
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in
activities
which is
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are
truely
Desired by their heart sooner or later.Correct your spelling
truly
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