The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the rates of both
women
and men who passed their driving test
in one Asian country between 1989 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of women
Correct pronoun usage
who passed
passed
the driving Wrong verb form
passing
test
is distinctly higher than men’s from 1980 to 2010. Furthermore
, a significant increase in the percentage of both men and women
passing the driving test
can be seen over the period given.
The percentage of women
who passed the driving test
started at around 48% in 1980. This
figure then
rose evidently to about 68% in 2000, before falling slightly to approximately 65% in the final year.
In terms of men who passed the driving test
, the rates were relatively lower than women
in the first two decades (about 28% and 38% respectively). After 1990, the rate climbed to nearly 50% in 2000 and remained the same in the last
year.Submitted by crystallassley on
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