The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph compares the proportion of several majors in a university in 2012 for male and female academic staff members, and these majors are: arts,
business
, education, engineering, law, medicine and science.
Firstly
, engineering accounted the
highest percentage for Change preposition
for the
males
, but for females
it was the lowest one of all 18%. Add a comma
,females
Besides
, for females
the one that comes at the top is education which was at 72%, Add a comma
,females
although
for males
it was the least
one at 25%. Correct your spelling
last
In addition
, medicine had almost the same ratio for both genders. Also
, business
and science comes
Change the verb form
come
secondly
after Change the word
second
the
engineering, it reached Correct article usage
apply
to
62% for Change preposition
apply
males
. However
, for females
arts was in second place at 58%, after engineering major, followed by medicine at 50%.
Overall
, females
were less interested in these two majors engineering and business
, but their big interest went for
choosing education and arts. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, males
seem to like engineering the most, as well as
science, business
and law 60%.Submitted by dialamustafaalwais on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words business, males, females with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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