The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010
The pie chart illustrated the proportion of a variety of
material
which contributed to electricity from 1990 to 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
materials
Overall
, coal and Natural gas were significant in 2010. However
, nuclear power
had the smallest percentage in 2010. When it comes
the smallest sector, it can clearly be seen that Add the preposition
tocomes
hydro
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hydropower
power
was the least in both 1990 and 2010.
Take a closer look at the figure, nuclear power
and hydro
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hydropower
power
were the most modest parts, which accounted for 17% and 6% respectively in 1990. Besides
, nuclear power
had the most obvius
change which Correct your spelling
obvious
rockected
by one-half from 1990 Correct your spelling
rocketed
protected
th
2010. Correct your spelling
to
In contrast
, hydro
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hydropower
power
only experienced a slightly
drop Change the adverb
slight
about
4 Change preposition
of about
percent
in the period. Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, Natural gas and coal had the same proportion in 1990, which was totally unchanged in 2010. They both modestly increased by 15%. Natural gas, which used to be the largest section, fall noticeably by almost one-fourth.Submitted by penny.910703 on
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