The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010
Throughout our lives, we have been taught that
life
is a matter of winning or losing. If you aren’t winning Use synonyms
then
you are surely losing. To some extent that’s true. And that Linking Words
concept
sometimes comes in another form ,Use synonyms
for instance
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this
school. Linking Words
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sounds like a good motivational Linking Words
concept
.Use synonyms
however
, it comes with a great cost. What if you didn’t manage to get the score you wanted or you didn’t get accepted to your dream college? The answer for most of us is, I will be sad, devastating but I will manage to move on easily. The truth is that Linking Words
this
is not always the case, as sometimes you will not be able to move on and you will be stuck in that loss. And Linking Words
that is
because most of us live our Linking Words
life
with winning or losing Use synonyms
concept
which is dependent on achieving our goal and that sometimes can make you overwhelmed, even if you managed to achieve your goal as Use synonyms
life
will start to look like a field of battle to you, either you win by achieving your goal or you lose by not being able to achieve your goal. But, what if we walk through our lives with the Use synonyms
concept
of Use synonyms
values
? As Use synonyms
this
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concept
will assure that you walk the road you want and live the Use synonyms
life
you value without being anxious about the outcome. Use synonyms
For example
, let’s say that you value being a devoted hard working person, when you don’t get the score you want, it’s unlikely that you will be upset as long as you keep your Linking Words
values
. Use synonyms
Values
are the opposite of the winning or losing Use synonyms
concept
. Use synonyms
Values
are an endless road ,unlike goals.
Having said that, to make sure that you keep your Use synonyms
values
you have to set some goals. Use synonyms
In contrast
to the previous Linking Words
concept
, the only purpose of these goals is to make sure that you keep your Use synonyms
values
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in our previous example, to be a devoted hard working person I have to sleep and wake up early.Linking Words
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