You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Manager I am here in your hotel
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was made 2 days ago and since
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I have
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with some
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with the air system in my
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. I know that we are in the middle of the summer, but I
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to you with
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that my case can be solved.
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my first day here, the temperature was very
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, about 75º F, perfect
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me, and
in
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the
fisrt
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night I
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up in the middle of
night
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and the LED
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show me 80ºF, I do not know what is
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do not touch in nothing
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do not touch in anything
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, just it
is change
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alone. Was so warm inside the
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, that I
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to take a shower for cooling my body,
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us
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stay in July, was impossible to open the windows, and I try
reset
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the
air conditioned
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, he make some noise and start
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, and
finally
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start cooling again. I hope that you can
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someone to fix
this
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issue in my
room
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, because
that is
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my first time with some trouble in
this
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hotel, at least
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was impossible to solve
this
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, I would like to change to another
acommodation
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.
To
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conclusion, I know the hotel is
full
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at full

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capacity, but I love
if
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you pay attention
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my situation here. Yours Faithfully John Phill

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