The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to apply for the part-time position in your school library which you advertised on 5th July 2023. Starting with my academic record includes having

at the end

of May 2023 a Master of World Literature, from ABC University. I achieved consistent results which reflect my hard work and determination to work. My second major in Public Management is

also

a good fit for

this

position. As for my work history, I have worked for 3 months at BC library, a private one in my town, where I assisted the manager with registering and labelling the books.

Furthermore

, I was

also

in charge of the cleaning job in the reading area. From what I leant from there, I am sure I will be the candidate you are looking for. The reason why I am interested in

this

post is that I will soon graduate and I am looking for a temporary appointment to accumulate my experience, which can help me be prepared for a permanent position in the future.

In addition

, I am planning to move to another city in autumn,

therefore

this

job is quite suitable for me as well. I appreciate your time and consideration of my application. Yours faithfully, Eason Chan

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

210 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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