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The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to apply for the part-time position in your school library which you advertised on 5th July 2023. Starting with my academic record includes having
at the end
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 of May 2023 a Master of World Literature, from ABC University. I achieved consistent results which reflect my hard work and determination to work. My second major in Public Management is
also
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 a good fit for
this
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 position. As for my work history, I have worked for 3 months at BC library, a private one in my town, where I assisted the manager with registering and labelling the books.
Furthermore
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, I was
also
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 in charge of the cleaning job in the reading area. From what I leant from there, I am sure I will be the candidate you are looking for. The reason why I am interested in
this
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 post is that I will soon graduate and I am looking for a temporary appointment to accumulate my experience, which can help me be prepared for a permanent position in the future.
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, I am planning to move to another city in autumn,
therefore
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,
this
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 job is quite suitable for me as well. I appreciate your time and consideration of my application. Yours faithfully, Eason Chan

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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