The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
This
report illustrates a pie chart depicting how employed individuals in a country spent their time
across six different activities in the years 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, in the year 1958, the least time
was spent on travelling to work while
in 2008, going out with friends and family was the least practised activity. In terms of majority time
spent, in both 1958 and 2008, adults spent most of their time
working.
The percentage of time
spent going out with friends and family reduced by thirteen per cent
from 1958 to six per cent
in 2008. Similarly
, the proportion of time
spent on sleep in 1958 was seven per cent
more than that of 2008's twenty-five per cent
.
The duration spent on work, Change preposition
in.
however
, increased in 2008 by nine per cent
from 1958 to forty-two per cent
. Likewise
, in 2008, there was an increase of five per cent
dedicated to hours relaxing at home in 1958 when only eight per cent
of the time
was spent on that. Lastly
, from 1958 to 2008 there was also
an increase in travel to work from two per cent
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