You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter explain where your friend can get the keys to the apartment give your friend some instructions about using your apartment recommend some places to go

Dear Tammy, How are you recently ? I am going to visit Japan on the 1st of July and I probably will stay there for a month. Thank you for being my house-sitter during my vacation. Regarding how you get the key, I am going to leave the door key to my neighbour, Brian, who is living next to me, and you can get my key directly from him. You could contact him on his phone
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63431234 before your arrival. As my home is designed with high technology,you can control all the electronic gadgets like the fan, the light and the television with a small control panel which looks like a remote. You can find it in the cupboard which is just next to the main door.
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ten years and the city changed a lot. I highly recommend you spend some time and visit Cheung Sha Wan as there are many new coffee shops and retail shops. As a coffee lover, I think you would enjoy your time visiting that area. If you have any questions about my home, please feel free to contact me. Once again, thank you for your help and I hope that you have a pleasant experience in my place. Best regards, Jennifer
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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