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In some countries, if people need to find work, they have to move away from their families and their friends. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In some parts of the world, people must sometimes leave their countries,
families
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 and friends in order to seek
work
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.
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 they obviously have a good reason to make
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 a hard decision, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. On the one hand, the great advantage is to be able to earn a living in another
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. If they are unable to find
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 in their own
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, many men join the global migration of labour. Leaving their
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, they become economic migrants, sending money home if they are able to find
work
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. In France,
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, many migrant workers from North Africa
work
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 in the construction or service industries, in order to support a family in their native
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. If they had not moved to another
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 and found
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, their family would have remained poverty-stricken and without hope for the future.
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, there are too many disadvantages if
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 situation is allowed to continue.
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, local populations are sometimes prejudiced against migrants and their
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, and so they find it difficult to integrate into society.
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, they may have to accept
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 in the host
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 low-paid and labour-intensive, and a working environment
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 dangerous and unhealthy.
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,
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 movement of labour has consequences for developing countries. It results in the disappearance of traditional ways of life,
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 destruction of ties of kinship and close-knit
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,
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 economic activity is left in the hands of an
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 population. The loss of the youngest and most active members of the community is incompatible with a sustainable future for that county. In conclusion,
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 workers and their
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 may be forced to move abroad in order to improve their lives, the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
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