You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions

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Dear Sir I would like to write regarding applying for a part-time
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in the hotel. I would like to ask some questions below. Currently, I'
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a student and a final year of a university. I'
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studying Computer Science. I have a year's experience in
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field. I think the
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is suitable for me.
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, I'
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good at communication and help you to resolve any situation in your hotel.
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, I'
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hard-worker person and more proactive when the customer needs me in order to improve customer service.
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week, I have seen an advertisement. But, It's general things for me. I'
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happy to when you share more details about
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job
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. I have some concerns about parking and the
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description.
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, I read details about car parking. But the company will support the fee for parking or not.
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, If I know English, I can negotiate with you about the salary. I hope you can respond to me as quickly as possible. If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me. Thanks and regards Vy Nguyen
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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