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You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

#weekend #hotel #arrangements #type #rooms #cost #activities #places #interest
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know of our plans to stay
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 hotel from February 26, 2022. I,
along with
 six of my family members, would like you to kindly make some arrangements for our visit and would like to book three rooms in advance. We would like to book three sea-facing rooms preferably o the same floor. Please be very particular about the rooms being well-lit and aptly ventilated with enough windows for the outside view.
Also
 kindly let us know if you have
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 facility at your hotel with
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 functioning Jacuzzi bath. It will be great if you send us
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 rough estimate to stay for the aforementioned dates, including food and subsidiary services.
Also
 please let us know if there are any interesting tourist spots near your hotel that you think would be worth visiting. Looking forward
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 from you. Yours Sincerely, Abdalla Omar
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accommodation
  • Arrival and departure
  • Sea view
  • Family suite
  • Cost estimate
  • Activities and amenities
  • Water sports
  • Cultural sites
  • Natural attractions
  • Places of interest
  • Confirmation of booking
  • Warm regards
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