In spite of the many advances women have made in educational and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace?

Recently the issue has been brought into focus by promoting equality of opportunity for

men

and

women

in the workplace.

That is

why there is now greater equality between working

men

and

women

. In

this

case, I think that can be done to address the problem constructively One thing

that is

of great significance is that

society

can take advantage of

women

's

strength

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. They might be noticed with signature characters

such

as smart, flexible,... In the past, many kings chose a queen like that. It helps affect the prosperous and expanded country.

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time ago,

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Mi Nguyet was famous as the

role

queen which united their area and developed the economy in China. Nowadays,

this

case is happening because of

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more

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and more

women

to management positions.

This

will exert a far-reaching influence on encouraging equality, especially

women

's

role

in

society

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a lot of promotions and opportunities. The most familiar example of

this

is National Assembly Chairwoman Nguyen Thi Kim Ngan who was a part

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useful policies for Vietnamese citizens.

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, it spends a lot of time with

women

that

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is so important for them in the family's mother

role

such

as nurturing and teaching a child,... It seems quite clear that

women

have special factors not only in the family but

also

in

society

day by day.

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this

,

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aspectis

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the same numbers of

men

and

women

. The immediate result

is produces

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women

are paid the same salaries as

men

.

That is

why, more and more

women

become richer, famous businesses. It can be explained that they do better and promote fairly. Mrs Tang Thanh Ha, Ho Ngo Ha and

Ms.

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Tong Khanh Linh... are generally

as

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an example of successful

women

, with great finance and investment plans.

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their age and

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is

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more limited than

men

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can reduce earning performance in future. Probably, there is some truth in the idea that they help establish a balanced family and

company’s

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economy. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that

women

are famous for a variety of roles in

society

and the family.

That is

a little bit of a problem with them when they develop finance in their mother's

role

. In order to punish the growth economy, Governments can take action by giving a chance by showing the way forward and encouraging change in the rate of

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labor

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with great policies of the company

such

as expanding

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period, encouraging capital with more

women

’s rate,...