The percentage of five different kinds of energy output in France between 1995 and 2005 is shown in the two pie charts.

The

pie

chart provides data about the percentage of the three main sources of energy in three different diets.

Overall

, it can be seen that carbs take

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lot of space in every type of

diet

while

protein

and fat share a reasonable

proportion

in each way. Looking at all three

pie

charts, carbs are

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to be

dominated

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in Healthy

diet

for sport with over a half of the

pie

chart at 60%.Moving to the Healthy

diet

,

carbohydrates’s

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proportion

now have lower than the

diet

that is

for sport but as a matter of fact, it still

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exactly

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half of the

pie

charts.

However

, in the average

diet

, carbohydrates

are

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fall down to 40%, equal to

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protein

. To the other two

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, fat and

protein

share almost

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same

proportion

but in any case,

protein

is always slightly bigger than fat.

In addition

, the gap between

protein

and fat

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only 10% with 25% for

protein

and 15% for fat in

healthy

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diet

for sport.

This

difference is unchanged in the healthy

diet

chart when

protein

at

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30% and fat

at

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20%.

However

, the balanced eventually broke when

protein

’s

proportion

grow up to 40% and now is twice as much as fat in the average

diet