The table shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries
The table indicates the percentage of women working in the labour force and management in five different countries. The number of working women in that area varies from less than 10% to almost 50%.
If we look at the proportion in
Australia
, more than 40% of female works in the labour force and management. Use synonyms
However
, by average calculation, Linking Words
Australia
is not the top contributor. The United Use synonyms
States
average amount of percentage is slightly higher than Change noun form
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Australia
's with 46% and 43%. Even though the United States won by an average of points, Japan breaks the record for women labours with nearly 50%. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, inversely proportional to Japan, Egypt shows no more than 20%.
As gender equality seems to be more advocated these days, females have started to make their way to corporate leadership. The data shows that Linking Words
Australia
and the United States have the same proportion and are considered high-ranking compared to others. Japan took second place with 12%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Sri Lanka provides the lowest number by only 9%.Linking Words
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