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The table shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries

The table shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries
#proportion #women #labor #force #management #five #countries
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The given
trable
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table
travel
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anout
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about
 the population of
women
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labor
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labour
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force
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 and
women
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management
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countries
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.
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are
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 5
countries
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.They are Australia,Egypt,
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Sri
 Lanka,∆
apan
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Aman
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United
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in
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 Japan is the highest rate of
women
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work
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labour
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the labour
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force
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 and in Egypt was the lowest rate of
women
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works
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labour
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the labour
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force
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.In Australia and United
Srtates
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States
is
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the highest
proportion
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 of
women
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management
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iin
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in
five
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countries
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,
then
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srl
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Sri
 Lanka is the lowest capacity of
women
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 in
management
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in
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of
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five
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countries
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. In detail,
population
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 in Australia more than 40% of
women
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works
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work
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 in
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labour
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the labour
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force
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 and in
management
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five
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countries
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.The
proportion
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 in Japan
48
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is 48
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% of
women
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 work in
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labour
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the labour
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force
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.It is the
higest
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highest
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five
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countries
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.As you can see,
average
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the average
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proportion
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 of
women
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works
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working
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 in
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the lobour
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lobour
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labour
force
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 is
the
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about 40%.The
proportion
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 in Egypt does not over
than
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40% and
average
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the average
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 rate of
women
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works
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working
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labour
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the labour
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force
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 and in
management
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 is around 16%. Population in srl Lanka more than 40% of female
works
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labour
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the labour
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force
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,
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women
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management
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 no more than 10%.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, force, management, countries, labour, works, proportion, five with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Labor force
  • Management
  • Proportion
  • Gender gap
  • Leadership roles
  • Workforce participation
  • Variance
  • Economic factors
  • Cultural influences
  • Legal framework
  • Education
  • Maternity leave
  • Workplace discrimination
  • Career progression
  • Gender equality
  • Organizational policies
  • Case study
  • Representation
  • Strategies
  • Disparities
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