The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided illustration compares
water
consumption
for three main purposes in six different areas namely: North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that
Asian
and
African
countries used more
water
for irrigation
while
North American and European countries used more
water
for their industrial needs.
To begin
with, a major portion of
water
consumption
could be observed in the agricultural sector and
this
was higher in
African
and
Asian
regions than that
of
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in
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American and European parts. More than 80% of
water
in Africa and Asia went into agricultural fields
while
this
percentage was only 32% in
Europe
and 39% in North
America
. North
America
and
Europe
required more
water
in their industrial sectors than that
of
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in
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Asian
and
African
countries.
While
half of the
water
was used in the industrial sector in North
America
and
Europe
, the percentage of that in
African
and
Asian
regions ranged from 5% to 12%. Interestingly,
water
consumption
in North and South
America
shows a contrasting scenario.
Finally
, more percentages of household
water
consumption
could be observed in American and European continents than that
of
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in
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Asian
and
African
regions.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, consumption, america, europe, asian, african with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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