The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided illustration compares
water
consumption
for three main purposes in six different areas namely: North America
, South America
, Europe
, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia. Overall
, it is clear from the charts that Asian
and African
countries used more water
for irrigation while
North American and European countries used more water
for their industrial needs.
To begin
with, a major portion of water
consumption
could be observed in the agricultural sector and this
was higher in African
and Asian
regions than that of
American and European parts. More than 80% of Change preposition
in
water
in Africa and Asia went into agricultural fields while
this
percentage was only 32% in Europe
and 39% in North America
. North America
and Europe
required more water
in their industrial sectors than that of
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in
Asian
and African
countries. While
half of the water
was used in the industrial sector in North America
and Europe
, the percentage of that in African
and Asian
regions ranged from 5% to 12%. Interestingly, water
consumption
in North and South America
shows a contrasting scenario. Finally
, more percentages of household water
consumption
could be observed in American and European continents than that of
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in
Asian
and African
regions.Submitted by mdelvega90 on
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