The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

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The line chart gives information about how much carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions

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in 4 different countries over a period of 40 years.

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carbon dioxide emissions in Italy and Portugal increased dramatically.

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CO2 emissions in the UK and Sweden saw a significant decline.

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The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. write a letter to him/her and say Agree to this arrangement say what time is suitable for you Describe what you are planning to do

In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.

Some people think that museum should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the past, museums stored information about culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found through the Internet, so there is no need for museums. Do you agree or disagree with this view?