The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the process of purifying
rainwater
into drinkable levels in a town in Australia.
Overall
, there are four steps to producing drinking water
with rainwater
, including collecting raw ingredients, making processes, and delivering the final results for domestic usage.
First of all, a system is built underground with pipes connected to drains in each house, which the rainwater
will be redirected into the system through it. The raw ingredient will undergo the first step through a water
filter, before being stored in storage. Later water
in the storage will continue its journey to water
treatment, which will release chemicals to remove the additional impurity substance.
After all
processing is completed, the drinking Add a comma
,all
water
which is transformed from rainwater
is ready to be used. They will be pumped into the tabs in the houses above the system through different pipes, which connect houses and the container of water
treatment. The water
is for residential usage
.Replace the word
use
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