The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
A glance at the pie charts reveals information about the consumption of
water
in the industrial, agricultural and domestic fields in six areas in the world( North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
,
Africa
, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
).
Overall
,
it is clear that
Europe
has the most
use
of
water
in the industrial
section
(53%),
whereas
Central
Asia
has the least
use
in
this
field(5%), and the most
water
that is
used there is in agriculture(88%).
According to
the pie charts, after
Europe
, North
America
has the most
use
of
water
in the industrial
section
with 48%. South East
Asia
, South
America
,
Africa
, and Central
Asia
have less share in using of
water
in the industry with 12%, 10%, 7%, and 5% respectively. South East
Asia
, Central
Asia
,
Africa
, and South
America
utilize over 70% of their
water
source in agriculture(71%, 88%, 84% and 71% in order).
On the contrary
, North
America
only
use
39%, and
Europe
use
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32% in
this
field. The least usage of
water
sources in the domestic
section
in comparison with the industrial and agricultural
section
is in North
America
(13%),
Europe
(15%), South East
Asia
(7%),
while
domestic
use
of
water
in South
America
is 13%, in
Africa
is 9%, and in Central
Asia
is 7%.
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  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
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  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
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  • population density
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