You have returned from your vacation to stay a bed and breakfast.When you have checked your bank account,you realised youhave been charged twice for the deposit. Thank the host for your stay Explain the double deposite charge situation Ask the host for a refund

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Dear Sir I'm writing a letter to you to bestow me
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I checked my bank
account
, I realised I have been charged twice for the deposit. As it is known
that
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, I want to thank you for the well-equipped bedroom and for the wonderful breakfast. As
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, when I got home I checked my bank
account
.
Then
I was sure that my
account
was debited twice for the deposit. It was obviously some kind of misunderstanding. As it is obvious
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, I request you to return the excess money. You can send the money in cash or to my bank
account
. I'm
eagrly
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eagerly
looking forward to being accepted my request. You would be so kind to me
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if it is accepted as soon as possible
Your
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faithfully Go'zalxon
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