The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The given charts illustrate the percentages of France's production of power from five various sources in 1995 and after a decade.
Overall
, it is noticeable from the pie charts that produced power from coal and gas had not significantly changed ,
whereas
petrol and nuclear has a bit of change in producing energy in 2005. Turning to the details , there were three pivotal sources of energy
such
as gas, coal and petrol, and all of them produced about 30 per cent of the whole production in 1995. After 10 years , coal and gas productions of intensity are still unchanged ,
however
, the amount of the produced strength from petroleum considerably decreased and it consists of 19.55 % of all intensity in 2005. In general, 10.10% of the produced energy is gotten from petroleum, which is bigger approximately 4% than in 1995, when it was only 6.40%.
Then
, other sources of production have more ratio of spirit in comparison to a decade before, to be exact it rose from 4.90 % to 9.10%.
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