The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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The chart provides information on the share of international
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graduating from each Canadian province over a period of 5 years.
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, there is a significant increase among these provinces.
It is clear that
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New Brunswick dominated a large number of foreign
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in 2001 which had nearly 7%. In the same year, Nova Scotia and Quebec, these two countries
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had more than 5% proportion of oversea
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, meanwhile, other areas had less than 5 per cent. In 2006, some parts of Canada experienced a skyrocketing increase in their ratio of global
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, and New Brunswick had the highest percentage up to nearly 12%
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Nova Scotia and British Columbia both had over 10%,
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the percentage of international
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in other countries increased noticeably which about 6% to 8% except Alberta.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage change
  • share of international students
  • university graduates
  • Canadian provinces
  • increase
  • decrease
  • overall trend
  • notable similarities
  • economic conditions
  • immigration policies
  • numerical values
  • reputation of universities
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