The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.
The line chart illustrates how much
oil
was produced and consumed in China from 1982 to 2006. Overall
, it can be seen that there was an upward trend in both the production
and consumption of oil
during the given period
. In addition
, oil
consumption climbed significantly faster compared to its production
over 24 years. At the beginning of the period
, the figures for both oil
production
and consumption were nearly equal, at around 2 million
barrels per day. After 8 years, the amount of oil
produced rose significantly by 1 million
and remained unchanged until 1994. Meanwhile, that oil
consumed witnessed stability until 1990, after which it climbed remarkably to 3 million
in 1994. In the second half of the period
, the figure for oil
production
increased slightly to 3.5 million
barrels per day. By contrast
, the amount of oil
consumed grew steadily by 1 million
every 4 years,
and Remove the comma
apply
finally
reached a peak of 6 million
at the end
of the period
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